Last Sunday, Anthony and I edited for 15 hours straight. Our process has been pretty straightforward, we just go through each scene chronologically, watching it, looking at anything that bugs us, and finessing it. It’s a great process because by starting at scene 1 and ending at scene 121, by the time you get back around to scene 1 again it feels fresh. You haven’t looked at it for a little while.
We had our second crew screening on Monday night, and it was hard both technically and emotionally. We hadn’t had enough time to burn a dvd, so we were screening off of our computers. It took 3 computers to get one that would play the file (my laptop had actually crashed and was in for repair). Then we had to connect the computer to a TV, but unfortunately the TV turned off and crashed the computer everytime the image cut from a black screen to a bright screen. Throughout the course of the movie, we use the transition of sharp cuts to a black screen constantly. So this wasn’t going to work.
Thankfully, both Jerren and Michelle had video projectors in their cars. Jerren also had a keyboard amplifier. So after much tinkering, we had a little makeshift screening room in Anthony’s house. And it felt like a screening – there was a screen, and a projector, and all of us had to sit in rows to watch it.
The film played, and I experienced a complex series of emotions while watching it. First off – I was feeling very sick. When I get stressed, my body just falls apart. Between trying to finish a cut of the film by next Monday, and also at work I’m prepping to leave to go to Florida for a documentary project, I’m burning the candle at both ends. The other tricky part of screening the movie at this stage, is that I hadn’t watched it all the way through since June. The last time we screened it for other people, I was able to sit and watch it twice beforehand. Once by myself, and another with Anthony and Stephen. I knew where I stood with it. Here, I felt a little bit naked.
I was also really nervous. A few of my friends at the screening hadn’t seen the movie yet, but had worked on it more than a few weekends. I’ve been so anxious to show the film to them, because they’re my core audience. While we hope the film reaches a broader audience – these guys have the same taste as me, and I knew from the beginning that at the very least, my friends would see the movie.
The screening went very very well. It was awesome to see how all our reshoots fit into the larger puzzle, and to really feel that tangible improvement to it all. We reshot pretty much the first 10 minutes of the film; this impacted the ENTIRE movie. Moreso, it is so rewarding to hear people laugh, and laugh loudly, at things that weren’t as funny as before. There’s one scene in particular that we’ve been struggling with – we’ve cut it, and re-cut it, and tried just about everything with it, and on Monday night it got one of the biggest laughs out of the entire film.
At this point it is much much harder to gage the dramatic scenes. For the comedy scenes – they can be measured. If people laugh, the scene is working. If people don’t, then we have work to do. It’s that simple. But for the dramatic scenes, unless people vocally gasp at something, it’s harder to measure. You don’t know if people are invested or bored because the room is quiet.
The thing that gets you through is honesty. And that’s the thing I really value in all of our friends – the feedback we’ve been getting from everyone has been both brutally honest, but handed to us in such a delicate way. The reason we showed the film to people is because we know that there’s only so far we can take the movie ourselves with our well-worn perspective. Their fresh perspective is going to keep us going.
And we’re in a great spot – it’s nice when you get feedback from four disparate people, but people who you entirely trust, that all agree on the same handful of issues. And the issues right now are not all that major – the primary one is simply pacing. There’s a couple points in the movie that feel a little long.
This is where the invention of DVD extras is able to get me through. There are some scenes that we’re looking at cutting that are my favorite scenes. But at least in this day and age, I know that they will continue to exist separate from the movie; they won’t disappear forever. It stings less.
That said, it’s still an emotional decision. And to me, the really hard part with all of this is making sure that both Anthony, Stephen, and myself can stay calm and even keeled when faced with making difficult decisions. I’ve heard a lot of stories where people get into vicious arguments at the end of the editorial process about how the movie needs to be cut, or what is going to stay in, etc. And after so much hard work, it would be a total drag if that happened. So we’re taking a really pragmatic approach.
On Wednesday we got together, and rather than talking about the solutions to the few issues in the movie, we just literally wrote down all the things we want to look at, that will either be trimmed, or certain shots we want to look at alternate takes, etc. If we can agree on the issues of the film – we’ll always be on literally the same page.
I have two rules that govern this process. I’m going to try everything. Any idea, even if I completely disagree with it, I am going to try it. It’s free to do it. And I could learn something I don’t know. The second rule is that if anyone feels really strongly about a scene, and not wanting it to be cut – it will stay in the movie. That way nobody is totally depressed about it. Friends first, movie second. Because even if it turns out a scene is not necessary to the final version of the movie, we did write it for a reason, emotionally or thematically. But we’re going to try it either way, and decide after we see it.
So yesterday, I took the day off from work, and dove in. Chronologically again. I was able to see the scenes with real clarity. Many of the scenes that people said we outright didn’t need – some of them we cut (for now, at least – they can always go back in if it doesn’t work), and some of them, I was able to make far shorter versions of. One scene in particular, after seeing it in it’s current state, I completely forgot what was even said in the full minute we had taken out of it.
Additionally, I was able to instantly see any redundant lines within scenes. I’m really concerned about making sure that the performances in the film feel natural, and a lot of the time if the actors repeated themselves or left long pauses in between words – I left it in. That’s how people talk. But I was able to really hone a lot of the scenes, and make the scenes more articulate by making the characters more articulate. It didn’t hurt the performances one bit.
I’m about halfway through, and somehow we’ve managed to cut 6 and a half minutes (!!!) out of the movie very very easily – while only making one drastic change. Now, of course we could watch this cut of the movie, and find that it goes way TOO fast. And in that case, we’ll have to go back in and add some air to it. But it feels good. By Saturday night, we’ll definitely have a much more improved cut, we’ll show it to a whole new batch of friends, and keep going from there.
mike